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Post by Liz'alike on Tue Apr 16, 2013 11:34 pm

AIO fans everywhere! If you have fan fiction you've been wanting to share, put it here!

Here is a short story I wrote for a school project:
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By: Lexi


“Go to bed Andrew!”
“Alright Mom!” Andrew hollered down the hall.
Andrew stepped into his room and walked towards his bed. He pulled back his pillow and grabbed his neatly folded pajamas as he flipped on an Adventures in Odyssey episode.
As Andrew started to slip into his pjs, his ears zoned in on what was playing, “I hate this episode! Why are they always ruining Odyssey with stupid characters?!” He snarled as he yanked the blankets back and fell into bed.
Andrew leaned over to his nightstand, switching the episode to one he liked better. “Now that’s what I’m talking about,” he stated as he lay back into bed.
Andrew closed his eyes, still hearing the Odyssey playing, he slowly felt his brain relax.
Before he could fall into a peaceful sleep he jerked and opened his eyes. Instead of seeing his bedroom, he was saw a ‘50s style restaurant.
“Where am I?” Andrew asked himself as he gazed at a chrome and red cushion filled room.
“Whits End.” A deep monotone voice called.
“Huh?” Andrew looked around him and saw a girl about 12 years old sitting across the way in a little wrought iron chair. “Did you say ‘Whits End’? And who are you?”
“I did say Whits End. And I’m Emily Jones. Are you okay? You look confused.” The girl stated, her deep voice ringing.
“You can’t be serious!” Andrew gasped under his breath. He gazed around the room. It looked similar to what he had imagined. A long counter with red cushioned stools lining it, little round tables with wrought iron chairs around the room and booths lining the walls and windows.
“What did you say?” The girl inquired, slipping into the same booth as Andrew.
“Did you say your name was Emily?”
“Yes I did. Emily Jones.”
“You can’t be! Your voice is completely different!”
“What? I’m pretty sure I’ve always had this voice.”
“No you haven’t! And what about Matthew?!”
“What about him? He’s probably off doing his stupid little detective investigations. I prefer going to the mall myself, but-”
“You’re not a detective?!”
“Uh, no. I find that line of work silly and pointless. If you were smar- Wait! Where are you going?” Emily asked as Andrew stumbled out of the booth and ran towards the front door.
“This can’t be happening! It just can’t!” Andrew yelled from across the room.
As Andrew ran past the front counter, a young woman wearing a green sweater yelled after Andrew. “Are you okay young man?” Her voice resembled what one might picture a mouse to sound like.
Andrew paused in his escape. “Are you Connie?!”
“Yes.” Connie said in a confused tone.
“You can’t be! You sound nothing like Connie!” Andrew whined.
“I can assure you that I’m Connie. Just ask my husband.”
“Husband?! Don’t tell me you married Jason!” Andrew asked, flabbergasted.
“Jason? Whit’s son? Don’t you know he died in the Vietnam war? I’m married to Richard.”
“Jason’s dead?! And who is Richard?!”
“Richard. Richard Maxwell.”
“What? You married him?” Andrew rasped.
“Are you okay? Can I get you some water or something?” Connie asked, concern showing on her face.
“I just need some air.” Andrew muttered, stumbling towards the front door.
As he pushed open the front door, he could hear the familiar bell above the door ring.
“Well at least that’s the same.”
Andrew started to walk towards McAlister park. He stepped onto the pavement only to get knocked to the curb by a passerby on a bike.
“Hey! Watch it, kid!” Andrew yelled as he fell backwards.
“I’m so sorry! I didn’t see you there! Are you okay?” The boy asked, his squeaky voice penetrating Andrews ear drums. His brown hair neatly slicked back, and his thick glasses slipped down to the tip of his nose. One could obviously see that the boy was the nerdy type.
“It’s okay. I’m fine.” Andrew announced, standing up and wiping the dirt off his bum.
“The name’s Andrew.” Andrew said, holding his hand out to the young boy.
“I’m Jay.” Jay said, taking Andrews hand.
Andrew stood there momentarily with his mouth agape. “What did you say?”
“I said, ‘I’m Jay.’ Are you okay?”
“No, I’m not. I gotta go!” Andrew stumbled across the street, running into the woods of McAlister park.
“What’s wrong?!” Andrew yelled as he fell against a tree in the depth of the woods. “Everyone is completely different! Emily isn’t a detective, but a girly girl. Connie is married to Richard Maxwell! Jay is nice and a nerd! And everyone’s voice has changed! Am I dreaming?!”
“No, you aren’t” A female voice announced.
“Who said that?!” Andrew gasped, jumping up and looking around frantically.
“I did.” The female voice stated.
“Where are you? Show yourself!”
“You are sowing what you have reaped, Andrew.”
“What?!”
“For years, every Adventures in Odyssey album that has come out, you have whined how some character has changed or you don’t like the new characters. Instead of listening to the lessons, you have whined about unimportant details. So now you have received your wish. Everyone is different.”
Andrew fell back against a tree, head in hands.
“What have I done? Is there anything I can do to fix this?!” Andrew exclaimed looking up at the sky.
“Because of your attitude, you have ruined Odyssey for many people. Be content Andrew. We all change. Even Odyssey.”
“But can I fix what I’ve done?!”
“Be content.” Then the voice disappeared.
Andrew looked around him, and saw a girl with long black hair walking through the trees. “Hey!” He yelled, and ran up to the girl.
“Can I help you?” The girl asked, her mature voice sounding.
“Hi. I’m Andrew. Who are you?!” Andrew asked taking the girl by her shoulders.
“I’m Camilla.” She said, her concern showing. “Do you need something?” She said, shrugging Andrew’s hands off her shoulders.
Andrew closed his eyes for a moment. ‘Of all characters!’ he thought. Camilla was his least favorite.
“I just wanted to say…”
“Yes?” Camilla said, her eyebrow raising.
“I just wanted to say I like you… just the way you are.”
“Um… Thank you?”
“You’re welcome. Bye!” Andrew declared as he turned away.
“Strange boy.” Camilla muttered under her breath.
Andrew broke into a run as he made his way back to Whits End. “I must make things right!”
Andrew ran across the street, yelling the whole way “I like you just the way you are!”
Andrew ran up the steps of Whits End and burst through the door. All heads turned towards Andrew. He panted for a moment, trying to catch his breath.
“Andrew?” Emily asked, her dirty blonde hair bobbing.
“I just wanted to say- I like you just the way you are! All of you!”
The floor broke from underneath Andrew, and he started to fall.
Andrew jerked and sat up in bed. He looked around him, noticing the clock reading 1am.
“Wow, what a dream!”
Andrew laid back down in bed resting his head on his pillow. On his nightstand, an Adventures in Odyssey still played.
“This is a- a Twilife Zone episode!” Andrew gasped, sitting up quickly, he flicked the adventure off and lay back down.
“Note to self: Never put a Twilife Zone episode on before bed.” Andrew muttered as he flipped over in bed and fell asleep.

The End.
What did you think? It's the first short story that I've written... So it might be a little rough Razz
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Fri Apr 19, 2013 9:02 pm

I love it!! Maybe will change the minds of some Emily haters a little bit... Very Happy
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Post by Liz'alike on Sun Apr 21, 2013 11:34 am

I hope so! I found myself thinking the same thoughts as most AIO fans: I really don't like the new characters! I don't like this new aspect, I don't like that new approach, etc.

But the fact of the matter is that's how AIO is now. I want to just embrace it and move on. I really am not willing to give it up... So I try to purpose to find the positive aspects Smile

So, that perspective is what inspired me. Smile
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Sun Apr 21, 2013 8:13 pm

Yeah, we can all learn a thing or two... :p
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Post by Liz'alike on Tue Apr 23, 2013 1:59 pm

Have you written any fan fiction, Connie?
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:15 pm

Not really. I should try though... hmm..
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Post by Liz'alike on Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:25 pm

Do you like to write at all??
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:28 pm

Yeah, I've written a couple of stories here and there, and my teachers say I'm a good writer. But I often just sit down and start writing. I don't get really far, but it's fun Very Happy
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Post by Liz'alike on Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:31 pm

Ahhh... I have the same problem! I'm actually working on a short story now... Hopefully I'll finish it Wink haha
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Thu Apr 25, 2013 7:02 am

Yeah, I know how it is Wink
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Post by Liz'alike on Thu Apr 25, 2013 11:37 am

I actually finished it Shocked... I'll probably post it over on SS when I fix it Wink
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Post by Connie_Kendall on Fri Apr 26, 2013 10:13 am

YAY! Where will you post it?
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Post by Liz'alike on Fri Apr 26, 2013 1:19 pm

Probably "The Labors of Liz." I have a friend I sent it to to see if she thinks anything needs to be fixed... But after that, I'll post it Very Happy
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Post by Shtakji on Sat May 11, 2013 5:11 pm

Really liked it,Lexi! Great job!! Very Happy
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Post by Liz'alike on Sun May 12, 2013 4:32 pm

Thanks Tak Very Happy

Have you written any fan fiction??
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Post by Ameraka on Sun May 19, 2013 7:47 pm

Good story Lexi! I can't believe it's the first short story you've written. Smile

“Note to self: Never put a Twilife Zone episode on before bed.”

Good advice. Wink

I also really enjoyed your story on The Soda Shop. It reads like you are a lot more experienced writer than you profess. Smile

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Post by Liz'alike on Mon May 20, 2013 6:09 pm

Thanks Very Happy That's really sweet! (who are you on SS?)
I'm glad you think I'm more advanced than I really am Wink I try... It's good to hear I'm not all bad Smile
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Post by Ameraka on Thu May 23, 2013 8:58 pm

I am Ameraka. Sorry for the confusion. Smile

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Post by Liz'alike on Fri May 24, 2013 8:36 am

Okay Very Happy Hi Ameraka! It's like I know you or something! haha
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Post by Ameraka on Wed May 29, 2013 11:23 am

Should I post one of my stories here? It's shorter than the other ones, but it is a sequel, and it's still kind of long (4 chapters). Or is there a better place to put it?

I could shorten it or post one or two of the chapters (they're only loosely connected).....

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Jason and connie hhee

Post by Ameraka on Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:20 pm

Picture of Jason and Connie from Aftermath. They are at the Harlequin Theater, but I don't usually pay too much attention to backgrounds. Smile
Just a sketch so ....they do not necessarily look like the official versions; it's how my imagination translates to the page, which I am NEVER satisfied with. Smile


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